"Haiku" Exercise

November 26, 2024 | Work: 2025-03

Written retrospectively.

Each card has a “venue” descriptor (when it’s used as a venue card), a “training” quote and rule, and a “dueling” quote and rule.

I wanted all three of these to fit together, somehow.

I had a list of all of the different quotes I was pretty sure I wanted to use, but I felt like I wasn’t combining them right. So I had an idea: I’ll print out all the phrases / quotes, cut them out, and then I can physically manipulate them. I’m a tactile person – I like being able to touch things when I’m working with them.

So I exported a list of all the quotes and printed them onto pages:

Initial printing

I went through and highlighted some of the quotes if I knew “ok this one is DEFINITELY going to be used for dueling”, to make it easy to be sure I had placed it correctly.

Then I cut them out using my paper cutter:

Paper cutting

Then I laid them all out on a table in a loose grid.

Laying them all out

I instantly knew this was the right approach. Combinations started to jump out at me, so I quickly moved the slips of paper around, chunking them off. After the first pass, it looked like this:

Grouped into sets of 3

Jokingly, I realized these kind of read like little fortune cookie haiku. (Yes, I know I’m being VERY LAX with my usage of “haiku” here – humor me). I guess there more like “tryptychs” maybe?

What was especially neat was how many of these felt coherent, thematically:

A training hall; You must practice constantly; Strategy is the craft of the warrior"

A courtyard; There is the spirit of winning without a sword; To Scold "Tut-Tut"

An orchard; The way of the farmer; The strategist makes small things into big things

An open field; If a gentleman dislikes strategy, he will not appreciate the benefit of weaponry; Empty Hand

A beach; All things entail rising and falling timing; An actual oar

A confined space indoors; You must appreciate that spirit can become big or small; Know the smallest things and the biggest things

This exercise did two things: helped me re-arrange the cardlist in a way that felt more coherent, and also helped paint a fuller picture about, mechanically, how I wanted the card to function.

I knew that I wanted the same “feeling” for the card, whether it was used in “training” or “dueling”. So this helped to ascertain what that “feeling” was.